You Have You Troubles
So you have your troubles I see
But are you much worse off than me?
And all the other people too
Who don’t cry out and shout like you.
For everyone has a troubled spell
Though much less than yours, you yell,
But do you really know of all
The problems other folks befall?
Yes, we all see your agony and pain
For you tell us over and over again.
And we recognise some kind of hero,
Who thinks everyone else has zero
Aggravation that can never be,
That bad as you constantly see.
Or is it maybe just your idea
That you have bigger problems near?
So that everyone else can only guess
At the level of your unending stress.
For I don’t believe you’re so sublime
As you have troubles, and I have mine,
But whilst you choose to shout aloud
I keep my suffering from the crowd!
Thus I may be seen in lesser pain
As you complain again and again.
So I suggest you look around to see
That others have troubles like you and me,
But maybe the greatest measure and test
Is to see who deals with their worries best,
For there are many problems in the world
Before you, all yours unfurled!
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That poem mirrors the1965 hit record of The Fortunes, (for those of not so many years), although their song is more on unrequited love, while my poem aims at the world generally, but you already got that didn’t you😏
Revival can be in many forms and probably one of the better known illustrations is the Phoenix rising from the ashes, where a phoenix burnt in its nest rises from the ashes as a fledgling, renewed and reborn.
Wonderful story that from Greek Mythology, and one we should all perhaps aspire to, especially in this current climate where many have lost much or even all and must rebuild. Easier said than done I know, but have a read of this next poem from my second book….
Round Trip
Time moves on and passes by
As I look back down the years,
To see good times and heartache
But a lot more fun than tears.
We can’t always control our lives
And why our world has cracked,
But your manner and character
Are judged by how you react!
So looking back with a sadness
At the times you regret or lost,
Will only waste and frustrate
Time you already want to accost.
Thus best to count your blessings
And good things that you’ve got,
For even if you’re struggling by
To many others you’ll have a lot.
Time moves on and passes by
As I look back down the years,
To see good times and heartache
But a lot more fun than tears.
Of course trials and tribulations
Can easily make you go insane.
But when I’m due to pass away,
Please can I go round again?
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Another little message there but as “you lovely lot” are good at them I will leave it to you, but most know my “style” by now, but then again, I do change it…… I have to do this as usual, “I’m often imitated, but never duplicated”! Aaaaa thanks guys, I feel better now😁
Once again I’m very sure you will know this but as I love literature please allow me my simply pleasures, like a child with a special and precious doll.
I just mentioned Greek mythology and that always reminds me of the saying “all Greek to me”. Of course, that’s an old English saying that means not understanding something and it was also coined by “my Ol’ mate Shaky” in his play Julius Caesar. Education or not, come on guys I try, I try.
Right I’ll bring the “party” down as it’s JOKE TIME..:-
1) Many people don’t like camping as they feel it is a too intense hobby….
2) I’ve just had a new ornate ceiling done, I’m not saying it is the best ever, but it is right up there…
3) I’m thinking of this now, for however much you push a pen and paper it still remains stationary!
Ok, ok, ok as the theme is on revival, I won’t put any more jokes this time🤡
Time for another poem, and a favourite of mine although written quite recently, 2019, and in my 7th book. it is a true story of a sort of revival and determination.
One Voice
I woke to the disappointment
Of rain hammering my mobile home,
For a storm seemed right overhead
And was pounding the roof dome.
So I turned over and back to sleep
To awake again in another hour,
But sadly the rain had not ceased
And thus my mood was sour.
But laying in bed hearing the din
A minor miracle then occurred,
For against the noise on my roof
Came the sweet singing of a bird.
A solitary chirping of morning joy
From a little chap I couldn’t see,
But the song he continually sang
Was a great delight to me.
Though what had motivated this bird
Whose song beat the noisy rain,
I’m sure I will never really know
But he kept up with his refrain.
Now I’m no great bird expert
So couldn’t tell the type or family,
But because he sang out in a storm
His form I didn’t need to see.
For soon a couple of other birds
Joined in with the singular voice,
Maybe encouraged and led by him
Or perhaps just their own choice.
So now against a strong backdrop
Of rain clattering on my roof,
I had this wonderful little choir
Singing out in beautiful proof,
That even in our dismal times
A determined song by one voice,
Can overcome depressive scenes
To offer a happier choice.
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Due to more Curse Covid restrictions and a holiday period (of sorts) not quite so merry, I don’t really have too much news only to repeat I “have” started on my ninth book, (but relax not aimed until around October time this year, 2021, there I’ve done it for the first time.
I will say I had a “lucky” contact from a lady, (NO for those of you that like suggestive comments NOT that, but you know who you are), who had bought my 5th book mistakenly thinking it was my latest. I’m very happy to say she now has both and intends to get all my books. WHICH is a good time to say you can buy mine with your Christmas money, winnings, savings or just to treat yourself….
ALL details of how to get them from me are on here, my website, email = lw1800@hotmail.co.uk Of course good old Amazon will supply them but I am cheaper and get more money out of it for Help for Heroes.
Last poem, and as love ❤️ can revive, mend, inspire and revive it is a “Romance Section” poem that I know many really like, and come on blokes don’t be shy….
All Through the Night
Sometimes only just to kiss you
Won’t make you feel alright.
So I have to state my intention,
To hold you through the night.
Which I hope will delight you
As much as it does for me.
So we must wait for morning
When we can then clearly see,
If our ensuing love was great
For both of us to have gains,
As it’s now my main ambition
To ensure our love remains.
So don’t be shocked at my ardour
As it is meant for me to show,
How much I want to love you
And not let our ecstasy go.
Because sometimes love is taken
For granted, causing disgrace.
But you can see I’m determined
That ours will stay in place.
But you need now to do nothing
More than you think is right,
When I tell you once again
I will hold you through the night.
Which I hope will reassure you
How my love is always bold.
So just lay back and enjoy it,
Along with my night long hold.
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I hope you enjoyed that poem, and all the Blog, and that poem is again from my 6th book…..
Just a quick thanks to you all for support and kind comments, (in various places and I’m not qualifying that) and Ted n Beth, who are feeling a bit redundant with no Gigs, (they say “Hi” Henry The First, our youngest fan I think), say HELLO as well.
Thus as The Journey Continues in REVIVAL mode it is goodbye and sincere wishes for a better and successful year to you all.
Love Laurie xx
As always we love to read Laurie’s poems and Henry loves to read the jokes too 😀😀
Ha ha, oh thanks you two, very kind, young Kelly & younger Henry😂
It’s always nice to get your feedback too..
Lv L xx
Ha ha, Thanks you two, and I love doing my Blog too…..
I’m glad you continue to enjoy reading the poems and jokes, and Henry, Ted n Beth will be thrilled you love the jokes, (although just between us, they don’t always get them lol)
Thanks again, L xx
You really do have a rare talent , I truly never thought I would be sat here reading and enjoying poetry.
I am so pleased I came across you and I have such gratitude for you for sharing so many heartfelt words .
Your poems make me stop and pause for a moment and allow me to collect my thoughts …sometimes recalling events in my own life …other times making me chuckle …often they are a welcome therapy within themselves.
So thank you you truly for that joy and emotion that’s sometimes heals through beautiful funny …heartfelt words
Sharon x
Thank you so much Sharon for your kind words, and yes I do try to relate to, and touch people with my words as I write about how life can be for us individually, but also collectively too…
It never fails to humble me when people say I have got them into poetry! Thank you,
Laurie xx
Great poems, as usual. Well done Laurie. Sending lotsaluv from S.A.
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Thanks as ever for kind words and support Suanne, really appreciated..
Glad you’re back too, L xxxx